Final Evaluation

Evaluation



East End Tales is a series of short stories written by Finn Kennedy about the East End.It was written as part of a Half Moon Young People’s Theatre Scriptworks project for Mulberry School for Girls in Tower Hamlets, London. It was performed on Thursday the 12th February 2015 at The BRIT school. When performing we used no special costumes, props or set, except from our pink stools that we used to help create specific set points; for example the pub, the sofa, the door for no.4 etc. In total, the play was very physical. This project was for our scripted plays unit (page to stage) and it was a complete ensemble piece. 

Throughout our progress of East End tales we have done various exercises to help develop ideas for the performance- for example the monologues we wrote for our characters, our roll-on the wall exercise, hot seating and finally group work. Group work has been a key factor towards developing our final piece, as we were split into two groups to divise our own tales with very little direction. As a result, i believe that we all worked hard to come up with our original ideas which we collaborated together to create our final scenes. This small group work was very well utilized and i am proud of what we managed to create together.
In terms of whole group work, i thoroughly enjoyed working as a class ensemble for tales 3,4 and 5 as we used all our own strengths to create one big, amazing piece of theatre. Working in ensemble has allowed me to gain better relationships with everybody in the class due to the teamwork that was necessary. Our connection as a cast has strengthened throughout our time of working on East End Tales, as not only are we supportive when being able to cover for lines or queue lines, but we also created a safe, friendly environment which meant every actor was comfortable when rehearsing and performing. I think a particular moment where we all worked well together was when we all took on the role of an animal; it was incredible to see how we could all us theatre to exist as something outside of our own bodies.  

When developing our work in rehearsals, we used particular exercises to help develop not only our piece but our acting skills. As i mentioned briefly before, we each individually wrote monologues for specific characters. By doing so we were able to micro analyse the character chosen and allowed us to make creative choices as actors and as writers. It also allowed us to incorporate our own ideas and opinions of the themes of the play into the piece, instead of following the structure of the text. The roll-on-the-wall exercise we did consisted of us drawing a figure, and wrote how the character was feeling on the inside of the figure, then wrote how the character was perceived around the figure. Not only was this extremely useful when developing our characters and our acting skills, it allowed us to think more about perspective in general life. I often find myself subconsciously taking life lessons from our theatre lessons, without direct intention.

A moment of the piece which served to be a main strength was the start of tale 5 where the girls are spread out across the space whilst the boys are lined up against the back wall- some sitting, some standing. Whilst the girls are tentatively applying makeup to cover up the harsh bruises given to them by their boyfriends, the boys are at the back with a daunting, terrifying look on their faces whilst they crack their knuckles in a threatening manner. The juxtaposition between the two groups is almost sickening as it harshly exposes the violent result of domestic abuse. I think as an ensemble cast we were able to get across this message  to the audience throughout the whole scene, however that particular moment was my favorite. 

Another moment created by an actor that was extremely effective was when Oliver delivered his lines in Tale 6, when he says something along the lines of "fag smoke hanging, pulses banging". I personally found his whole paragraph very captivating due to his approach on how we told the story; not only was this effective but at the same time the rest of the actors made heart beat noises and slammed their hands against their chest to build immense tension within the scene. This moment of the piece was very well done in my opinion as i was not in this scene so i was able to look at part of our piece from an audience perspective. 

I think that in terms of our weaknesses, an area we could (as a whole) improve on is projection. Sometimes it was difficult to hear certain voices over music or any other noises made within the scene. It is important that everybody projects loud enough for the whole audience to hear, otherwise if lines are lost then the energy and focus within the scene is automatically lost as well. Characterization was key within our piece as we each had to take on various different roles throughout the play, meaning that more research had to be done when creating your character. I believe that it was a challenge to juggle so many roles, as it is important to always remember character objectives; yet it is more difficult to do so when you have 7 characters to play rather than 1. 

These past two terms i have certainly developed my use of physicality, as i am often afraid to incorporate physical theatre into the work that i do, however i have now built up more confidence and i am a lot more willing to explore the physicality of a piece rather than just looking at text and subtext. This term i have learnt to take risks as this often results in a brilliant outcome; i have learnt this by watching certain choices my peers make in rehearsals. I have also learnt that having costume, props and set is not always necessary; sometimes all you need is a determined and focused cast of actors and a performance space. This simultaneously allows you to take control of direction, thus ridding you from any limitations.

My line-learning this term has been fairly adequate; i was able to be off script when we were told to, however i felt like i lacked when looking at subtext, and next term i really would like to be more disciplined when it comes to blocking and character objectives. Exercises like roll-on-the-wall are extremely helpful, so when i am presented with a character in the future i will utilize this in order to ensure i am trying my hardest to connect with my role. My focus in the class room has been strong in most circumstances however i sometimes let this slip when getting distracted by my peers. I know that this does not benefit my class of actors or the scene, so this is also something i would like to work on. I found our rehearsal process thoroughly enjoyable and i contributed at any time i could throughout our lessons, so i feel my personal progress rehearsal wise has been to a high standard.

In total, i believe that by participating in this project i am able to walk away from it with a much more positive attitude towards physical theatre and also have build a stronger connection between the actors in my class which is something that is very important when rehearsing and performing. I thoroughly enjoyed working on East End Tales and i could not have asked for a better cast to have done it with!
















Research post

East End Tales Research

A brief history:


East London has always been the poor relation of the West End. From the earliest times, it attracted trade and industry, thanks to its proximity to both The Thames and the River Lea. In particular, ‘dirty’ industries like tanning and tallow works clustered in the east, downwind and outside the city walls where ‘noxious’ trades were banned.
Despite this, the area remained a relatively pleasant place to live and work. That is, until the Victorian age…
As the British Empire expanded under Queen Victoria, so did trade and heavy industry. In 1827, the new St Katherine Docks opened, and with it, the need for large numbers of dock workers.Disease was rife: in 1866, a cholera epidemic swept the East End, killing 3,000 people.
 When social reformer Charles Booth produced his extensive survey of the living conditions of the poor in 1887, he concluded that 13% of the East End population was chronically poor and, of those, “a part must be considered separately, as the class for whom decent life is not imaginable.”
No wonder then, that crime, immorality, drunkenness and violence were so rife. Gangs, prostitutes and robbers roamed the unlit alleys that, by the late 19th century, had become known as ‘The Abyss’. Perhaps the area’s darkest moment came in the late summer and early autumn of 1888, when Jack the Ripper carried out a series of grisly murders on White chapel prostitutes. He was never caught.

Articles

When researching the East End i came across some articles. Here are their links:





As you can see from the titles, all three articles are about immigration and the variety of cultures and ethnicity in the East End. In my opinion, when i went to the East End myself, i thought it was wonderful to see the city full of such a wide, rich range of people to surround yourself with. The news however does not always portray it to be like this.


The play; East End Tales



Sleep in the day, come out at night.
That's when I reckon y'see the real East End.

East End Tales is a series of nine stories inspired by photos and news articles from local papers in east London.

It was written as part of a Half Moon Young People’s Theatre Scriptworks project for Mulberry School for Girls in Tower Hamlets, London. The story ideas were developed by a group of Year 10 Bengali girls over a number of weeks through a mixture of improvisation and written exercises, before being shaped and written up in a lyrical style.

The stories range from short contemplations on the nature of east London, through to longer tales of domestic violence, the drudgery of low-skilled jobs, petty crime and high density living. 

The play is suitable for performance by any group of young people with a good level of maturity. It is particularly popular with those studying GCSE Drama.

Because each tale is self-contained, it is possible to pick and choose among them to create performances of varying length, without affecting the overall narrative.



The script is published by Methuen in their anthology Six Ensemble Plays for Young Actors. 

The writer


Award-winning UK playwright, teacher, University tutor, writer-in-residence, arts blogger and new co-Artistic Director of Tamasha

Fin is a graduate of the MA Writing for Performance programme at Goldsmiths College, London. He writes for adults and teenagers and his plays are regularly produced in the UK and abroad. He is also an acclaimed teacher of playwriting and community arts project manager, with a particular focus on young people's projects in London's East End.

In November 2013 he took up his new role as co-Artistic Director of Tamasha, working alongside the company's co-founder Sudha Bhuchar for 18 months, before taking over fully in Spring 2015.

Fin's first play Protection was produced at Soho Theatre in 2003, where he was also Pearson writer-in-residence.

His second play How To Disappear Completely & Never Be Found won the 38th Arts Council John Whiting Playwrighting Award, the first time in 40 years that an unproduced play had won. It was subsequently commissioned by Sam West for Sheffield Crucible and produced to critical acclaim in 2007. It has since been produced in London, Los Angeles, Chicago, Washington, Melbourne, Auckland, and Portland, Oregon. The play has become a firm favourite with students and amateurs and is among Nick Hern Books' most licensed plays. 

Fin's first play for teenagers, Locked In, a hip-hop musical about pirate radio, was produced by Half Moon Young People’s Theatre in 2006 and 2008 and toured nationally, subsequently being awarded the runner-up prize in the 2008 Brian Way Award. His second play for Half Moon, We Are Shadows, was commissioned and toured during autumn 2007.

As well as writing plays Fin also has many years of experience teaching playwrighting at secondary, sixth form, undergraduate and postgraduate levels. He has worked for schools, youth clubs, local authorities and theatre education teams in inner city London and beyond, and is also a visiting lecturer at Goldsmiths College, Central St Martins and Boston University. 

Fin writes a well-read theatre industry blog at www.finkennedy.blogspot.co.uk about playwriting, teaching and arts politics. He is also an occasional contributor to The Guardian and The Stage. 

In early 2013 Fin wrote In Battalions, an independent report about the effect of Arts Council cuts on new plays and playwriting in England. The report was a response to comments made to Fin by Culture Minister Ed Vaizey, and is currently being widely circulated within the industry. 

Fin has been an Associate Artist at Tamasha since 2011, for whom he is also producing Schoolwrights, the UK's first playwrights-in-schools training scheme. Fin is currently developing new plays for Bristol Old Vic and BBC Radio 4.

Videos relating The East End


                                    London on film- The East End


Educating the East End trailer



                                                      
                                   The East end; then and now

How has the research helped your understanding of the play and your character?

The research has helped me to hold a better insight into what the East End really is like, because before we started the play my views on The East End were false accusations of what it really is like. I am now aware that the East End isn't anything like what is shown on the Tv soap Eastenders. Now i have researched the play, the place and the writer i am able to make wise decisions about my character and am able to incorporate this into my contribution to class work. 



Thursday 15th, Lesson 9

Brief reflection


Today we finished our progress on Tale 5 and continued to develop our grouped scenes (Tale 7 for me). As Tale 5 is the longest scene in the whole play, it took some time to get through to finishing it but I am now confident that we have all worked hard to make the scene the best it can be. Tale 7 was successful as we continued to develop our idea's, and we added in more physicality which helped the scene tremendously, however i do feel we still need to work on our focus. 

What we've added to tale five:
In tale 5 we continued to develop our movement as animals. Once everyone exists, the stage becomes a cafe where Ella bumps into Taffy. Taffy walks around the stage with an empty plan whilst everyone narrates. I deliver my lines about how she does not loose her temper at me, and i am positioned further down stage. Towards the end, when the women dies, Taffy is carried by 10 people as if she's in a coffin being carried to her grave. When Taffy's being carried, there is silence which defiantly has an impact as the focus is on the dead woman.

The use of levels at the start of the scene with the boys is also something we have added. Some of us are standing up, some on stools, some leaning etc. This helps setting the scene much more interesting visually.


Set yourself  three rehearsal targets:


1. Staying focus throughout the lessons


2. To ensure the transitions between scenes are clean

3. Write down and changes to blocking made in my script so I wont forget

Reflect on the targets set:  Have they been achieved? How?           


I felt as though my energy lacked sometimes in the lesson, however i tried to let it not effect my focus. I regained energy after we started our separate tales. 


I feel that this target is something we need to work on together as a class. We managed to make a few smooth transitions between scenes but not all are final yet. By ensuring we have smooth transitions we can keep a sustained pace throughout the play.
During the lesson i forgot to write down any changes made however at lunch i borrowed Alex's script to make the notations necessary.

What would you give yourself for today’s rehearsal? 



Marking criteria:
Why?
P2 Demonstrate personal and technical skills in rehearsal making a positive contribution to the process





M2 Demonstrate personal and technical skills in rehearsal, consistently making a positive contribution and constructive contribution to the process.
I was able to contribute creatively to my group and kept working on my previous target which was to ensure i knew my objectives. To do better i could make sure i am always focused with what i do.


D2 Demonstrate personal and technical skills in rehearsal with consistently positive and constructive contributions, engagement, commitment, input and self- reflection.






Thursday 8th, Lesson 8

Tale 1- Girls Scene


T
he session today was an opportunity to return to TALE 1 & 2. You needed to ensure that these were tighter and precise. 

Make some notes of what you need to do better within each tale.
  • Character?
  • Learning lines?
  • Learning cues?
  • Vocal awareness
Things we need to improve:

Our line and queue learning. As soon as we know our lines and are free from our scripts, we can then help to bring the scene to life, however we also need to know our queue lines in order to keep the energy of the scene!


We also need to work on vocal awareness- we need to ensure that whenever we deliver a line it is not monotone but has meaning and objective behind what we are saying. We also need to listen to one another in order to make sure that we sustain a fast-pace throughout the scene and that each new line delivered is portrayed as another part of the of the story that we are telling. 



You then started working in two groups on Tale 6 & 7. 
Write some notes on the creative choices that were made.
Write about the work that you need to develop further.
In Tale 6 choices we made are:

At the start, we created the "brother" stacking shelves, we had everyone who wasn't speaking, miming stacking shelves on each side of the stage. 
As each person that has dialogue speaks, they join together behind the counter which gives an intimidating effect which eventually builds up when facing the angry, racist man.Instead of me saying my line "VOOM" on its own, I suggested that we all say it as an ensemble to create a stronger effect.



Things we need to develop further are:

Timing and queues: We all need to know their queues and lines at the right timing to make the scene flow in a quicker, faster pace. We also all need to have strict focus so that they can work through our scene as quick as we can, leaving us with a great final result.




Set yourself  three rehearsal targets:


1. To keep my energy levels high throughout all scenes

2. To make sure i am always aware of my objectives when delivering my lines

3. To ensure i know my queue lines, and my own lines.


Reflect on the targets set:  Have they been achieved? How?           


I feel as if i have tried my best to make sure i have full energy throughout the scene today. Energy is important because if it is not constantly sustained it can result in the scene becoming dull.

In the lesson i was constantly reminding myself of my objectives; i was checking through my script as well to remember my notations.

I forgot two of my lines when i delivered my paragraph in tale 7, so i will go over my script and ensure i know all lines for my next lesson.



What would you give yourself for today’s rehearsal? 

Marking criteria:
Why?
P2 Demonstrate personal and technical skills in rehearsal making a positive contribution to the process







M2 Demonstrate personal and technical skills in rehearsal, consistently making a positive contribution and constructive contribution to the process.
I would give myself a merit today for the contribution in the lesson and the positive energy i tried to sustain, however i did forget my lines at one point which ultimately effected the flow of the scene.
D2 Demonstrate personal and technical skills in rehearsal with consistently positive and constructive contributions, engagement, commitment, input and self- reflection.











Thursday 18th, Lesson 7

Character that I play in East End Tales and how I develop them



Prologue 

In the prologue I am headlight for Matteo's taxi, along with Anya who is the other headlight. I cannot characterize this, so instead i focus on the physicality of it. I am sitting on the floor on my knees, whilst Anya is mirroring me on the other side of Matteo. One Matteo starts speaking, I make a humming sound to represent the engine running, and I slowly sway my torch back and forth to represent the movement of the taxi. At the end of the paragraph Anya and i lift our torches up to Matteo's face and say 
"Shit. Jumped a light there."

Tale 1 

In tale one I am a girl who is describing what kind of a man the East End would be if we could personify it. I have chosen to have her as a stereotypical teenage girl who is constantly checking her appearance, spends most of her time on her phone (texting, tweeting, instagramming) and is also obsessed with a boy. I have given her habits like constantly twirling her hair, rolling her eyes etc. I have added these subtle movements so that I can help to fully characterize her in my own way. When delivering my lines I am firstly writing a text, and then for my second line I am on the phone. 

Tale 3

In tale 3 the whole class works as an ensemble to personify the East End. In the tale  I vary between a typical lad in a pub, to a electrician who is eager to make sales, and then to a narrator who is telling the story of a man named Jack with a haunting past. During the scene the girls are sat on the floor and i have made a choice to sit casually with one of my legs crossed whilst the other i rest my arm on. I do so to make it more visually interesting. 

Tale 4

In tale 4 we all play the part of a young boy who helps an old woman with her shopping. I think that the act of kindness that the character shows towards this old woman really effects his outlook on life, and to portray this i am constantly aware of my facial expressions to make sure i am portraying how i feel about the woman, and about my father.

Tale 5 

In tale 5 i start off by playing the girlfriend of the man that lives next door; the man that has been abusing her. At the beginning i am applying makeup to cover the bruises and scars that the boyfriend has left. I often flinch when miming this; i do so to show both the emotional and physical pain my character feels. At one stage, we all as an ensemble morph into animals, and i have chosen to be a tiger who is violently ripping apart his prey. I made bold physical choices when doing so, and then we all slowly start to stop what we are doing- as if we have realized what we have done. This is effective as we do this along side Alex saying
"Less like a plate and more like an Elephant
Yeah
Or a baby pig"

Throughout the tale the babies of the parents who lived next door are constantly described as "baby pigs" so by the whole class starting to slowly morph from animals back into ourselves, we show the violent truth behind what is being said.
Eventually i am the narrator again; the son of the parents who live next door to the couple who are constantly and violently fighting. I allow my character to feel uncomfortable when talking to the girlfriend; i make subtle movements like wringing my hands together and shifting the weight between the heels and balls of my feet.

Tale 7

In this tale i start off by being a creature that is constantly hissing behind the racist man who is described as a "bulldog". Throughout the scene i use the hissing to portray the cruelness of the racism that is exchanged between the shop owner and the customer. Eventually, i become the shop owner and i am describing how i am proud of both my family and ethnicity. 


Next, write out some of your lines from each tale and next to the line write your OBJECTIVE for saying the line. Think about why are you saying the line and this will help you with finding how you might say this.



Tale 1- "Cos his dad used to smoke"
I think the objective of this line is that the girl is exposing flaws in the mans past, and i chose to make it seem as if she is gossiping about the man; just like any teenage girl would gossip about a boy.

Tale 3- "One of life's jugglers"
The objective of this line is to show how Jack is a man that doesn't have a particular passion towards something certain; he doesn't have a particularly structured life, but instead does what he wants when he pleases. 

Tale 4- "Try and keep the rain off her pensioners trolly"
The objective of this line is he is feeling some sort of sympathy towards to old woman who is clearly less able (in many ways) than he is, so he tries to shelter her from the rain that is not in her favor. 

Tale 5- "She just stands there, looking sad"
I think this line is trying to portray that the woman who is clearly being abused is not angry or does not have a temper; she is worn and tired and defeated by what she has been fighting with.

Tale 7- "Domestic bliss"
The objective of this line is my character finally realizing that he should be proud of his family and his ethnicity, and the strength of his bliss could not be conquered by the "pissed bulldog man" and his racial slurs.




Thursday 11th December, Lesson 6

What does ensemble mean to me?


To me ensemble means working together, feeding off one another's ideas and talents to create a piece of theatre. It also means that the focus of the piece is not divided- its shared between every performer. Choosing to do things in ensemble creates a completely different feeling when on stage and as an audience member, for example if you chose a group of 10 people to deliver a line rather than just one person, the line automatically holds more importance and strength.


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What has to happen in the rehearsal room to develop a successful ensemble?

We all need to create a comfortable environment in class so that everybody feels confident when taking risks. We all also need to be extremely focused because we are only as strong as our weakest link!


My favorite ensemble piece so far is Tale 5, as at first when I read through the piece i did not particularly feel connected with the piece, but now that we have developed this piece i have grown to love it as my favorite. I think this is because all throughout the piece everybody has sharp focus and the energy is almost palpable. I especially like this piece as we all get to take on roles of being animals at a certain part of the scene which is interesting as it allows us to stretch ourselves to be something other than our own bodies, and gives us a sense of freedom with our physicality.  The scene touches on some dark issues- like domestic abuse, and i feel as if by allowing the piece to be ensemble it handles the issues with sensitivity and creates more emotion towards the subject.


Tale 3:


We start off tale 3 by the boys using the stools to sit down on, whilst the girls stand around them around the room and we all take on a role of a loud-mouth man at a pub, who has a pint in his hand. The music "London's calling" is playing as we all simultaneously in slow motion drink our pints- and when the music stops we, as an ensemble, open the scene with the first line "If the east end was my friend". Throughout the play we take on roles of business men who are able to interact with the audience, but then become narrators of Jacks past, where we tell the story of a man who holds dark secrets that are disguised by his persona. We use a white bed sheet which stretches across the stage and whilst Roseby crawls underneath it, we use our torches to illuminate her body, to symbolize the "body of a man lies covered in snow". I thoroughly enjoyed this tale as I feel we all had high energy and the interaction with the audience was a good way to show our improvisation skills as well!

  • What characters do you play in this tale? 
In this tale I start off as another typical lad in the pub, but on the queue line "A bit of this, a bit of that" I turn into an electrician, which is when I interact with the audience. 
  • What is the atmosphere of Tale 3? How is this different to what we have created for Tale 1 & 2?

The atmosphere in Tale 3 starts off where we are all making the decision to be loud and rowdy pub goers, however this abruptly changes as we progress through the scene. It becomes more haunting and mysterious as we talk about a fight that ended badly between the main character Jack. This is different to Tale 1 & 2 because both of those scenes are much more choreographed and somewhat lighthearted in comparison to Tale 3.

Tale 4 

  • How have we decided to stage Tale 4? 


The scene starts where we move from our ending positions of tale 3 and all stand in separate groups with out umbrellas. We change the bar made from the stools into a chair for Will who is playing "Dad" in the scene. When we finish our opening paragraph, we all move out of our groups and sit spaced out across the floor; back to back with a partner. After this we then go into 3 lines that represent the aisles in a supermarket, when Nina says her queue line 
"We dodder across".

 After Nina has made her way through the aisles my line (which is the middle) go to our knees downstage center stage to create the counter of the shop. I take on the roll of somebody who is scanning items at the counter, and i continue to do so as Nina delivers her lines. I stop and sit back down when we, as a class, deliver the lines: 

" She says
  She says "

Benji and I then form the doors that Nina rushes through, to symbolize her walking back into her flat. We step together once Nina as through, to show the door has been slammed.

Further questions...


  • What acting skills have you continued to develop over the past few weeks? Is there anything new you have discovered about your own skills?

One main acting skill i am continuing to develop over the development of East End Tales is my confidence when using physical theatre. I often find using physical theatre to be a big risk, which I can find difficult to do, but I feel as though East End tales is helping me to gain confidence with that. 

I am also continuing to improve my projection; due to our staging it is always important that i am projecting as much as i can without staging, so that I am allowing the whole audience to hear my lines, rather than just certain parts of the audience. 



Return to all of the sections of the text we have staged so far. Select a line from each that sums up that tale.

Prologue: Knoworramean?
Tale 1: Even the traffic stops for him when he crosses the roadTale 2: At night she dreams of rainclouds Tale 3: You can see all of this if you look in Jack's eyesTale 4: Nobody's ever helped me before












Thursday 27th, Lesson 4

Monologues

At the start of the lesson we were asked to think about our favorite character that we have been given to play so far during our work on East End Tales. We were then asked to write a monologue by ourselves based on that character, and we were allowed to talk about the character in a different way then how they are portrayed in the tale. I chose to write a monologue on the woman "Michelle" from Tale 8. In my monologue I go into detail about Michelle's past as I wanted to give a background about her life that would then lead on to explain why she had turned out to be the way she was currently. 




Here is my monologue. It is not very clear to see so here it is typed up:

The corner of the alleyway is where I come most days. I guess it's because I have nowhere else to go, and I never get caught here. I know the police will probably find this spot soon, I will have to find somewhere else to go. But for now i'll stay.
Sometimes, i like it when it's really early- i like it when the sun has barely made its way over the horizon so the sky is a kind of canvas of deep oranges that slowly fade into cyan's and blues. Yeah. Sometimes i like it here.
The drugs often make it hard for me to concentrate- my hands start to twitch uncontrollably and everything is one big blur but i'm just... standing here. Looking at the sky. 
Maybe it reminds me of home. I don't remember much- I left when i was 16, which was 5 years ago now. Never once heard from my mum since. Bitch.
My dad was alright though- he used to take me to this park and we would lie down on the soaking wet grass (which would soak through our clothes, but we didn't care). Anyway, we would lie down and cloud gaze- you know, when you make pictures out of the.. yeah. You know. After that we would just close our eyes, as if we were trying to savor that perfect moment.
He died of lung cancer a few years later. 
Yeah, that's when my mum turned into a real stone-cold bitch. Probably why I've turned out to be such a fuck up. 
I don't know.
I'm not certain of anything anymore.



Staging


When staging my monologue I decided to start off sitting down on the chair as I started off. The start of my monologue is my character talking about the alleyway- her frequent spot to visit. In my chair I often made gestures to the corner of the room which I suggested was where the alleyway was meant to be. I tried to start off with my movements to be subtle, slow and precise. I made this decision so that I could build tension throughout the scene, rather than starting with my movements frantic and bold. Once I started to talk about the drugs that my character took, I stood up suddenly, and stared at the ceiling when I talked about the sky, as if I could actually see what I was talking about. When talking about my family and my father, I moved further downstage and looked out, past the audience and out of the window to try and in-vision the memories my character was recalling on. As the scene progressed, I sat back down in defeat on the finishing line:

"I'm not really certain of anything anymore"


Voice

When i started my monologue i tried to keep my voice at a monotone, so that i seemed somewhat un-interested in what i was talking about. However, as the scene progresses and once i start to talk about my family, my father and my mum i added a note of hysteria to my voice so that I could subconsciously portray how it had effected me. Once again, with my final line i tried to sound defeat and both mentally and physically tired. 



How did the monologue task help you understand the play further?


The monologue helped me to understand the play further as it allowed me to think about the characters past- although this wasn't mentioned in the tale. By thinking about the characters past, it allowed me to think of why she had certain characteristics and what had led her to become the person she currently was. This was very helpful and also allowed me to look at the character in different lights and helped me understand why she had made certain choices throughout the scene.



What monologue performed by a peer worked well and why? What had they written about? Who performed their monologue successfully and why?


A monologue that I felt was incredibly well written and performed was Roseby's.
Her monologue was about the landlord, a character that before the monologue had been performed, did not hold vast importance to me. However i thoroughly enjoyed Roseby's as she went into extreme detail about her past, which extremely intriguing. When staging her piece she began standing, but as the scene progressed she sat down, and took off her shoes, which was a subtle but bold choice at the same time. Throughout Roseby's scene I was thoroughly captivated, and her bold decision to use an accent was a fantastic risk that she took.



TASK 2

Unfortunately we did not get on to this part of the lesson so I cannot do this task.






I think that I worked at a  high merit level for this particular task. When writing my monologue I was constantly reading and going over my script to help the accuracy and research of my piece. I made bold choices with movement and voice, which I personally think helped the energy of the piece. To improve I could incorporate more elements of physical theatre which I personally find very bold and risk taking, but results brilliantly visually.